I’m sitting here struggling with this piece of work (“Fireflies”), and I haven’t been able to get much done. Something about the main character now seems almost whiny, and the rest of the story just seems disjointed and weird. I’m sure that my current reaction to the story is partly the “edit blues,” but another part has to be the fact that I’ve been sick the past week and a half.
I really wanted to get this turned in to the group for workshopping this Friday. I’d have to get it done some time in the morning/early afternoon for that to happen. I guess we’ll see, but I’m gonna call it unlikely at this point.